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This blog is written by a guest: My Dad (and published here with his permission).
His TOI WriteIndia competition submission:
Rules:
1. The story must be set in the Gupta Age, in Ujjain (the capital of the empire in its latter half).
2. It must involve a crime. And its resolution.
3. The below passage should be present in the submission.
"Supratik, the Chief of Police and Internal Security at Ujjain, walked rapidly up to the riverside, just as the body was being fished out. The officer supervising the operation turned around and saluted his commander immediately."
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This blog is written by a guest: My Dad (and published here with his permission).
His TOI WriteIndia competition submission:
Rules:
1. The story must be set in the Gupta Age, in Ujjain (the capital of the empire in its latter half).
2. It must involve a crime. And its resolution.
3. The below passage should be present in the submission.
"Supratik, the Chief of Police and Internal Security at Ujjain, walked rapidly up to the riverside, just as the body was being fished out. The officer supervising the operation turned around and saluted his commander immediately."
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The history teacher chalked four options on the
blackboard – the fourth one being ‘Ujjain’. She asked the Std. IX class, “Which
of these four is the seat of Jainism?” Pat came a bright reply, “option d) Ujjain”.
Well, one may laugh at the blurted answer
but suffice it to say that the Gupta kings, though Hindus, were tolerant enough
to see that all faiths flourished and didn’t even think of a totalitarian state
suppressing religious freedom or any other freedom. Little wonder then that the
Gupta period is called ‘The Golden Age’ of India, especially when Chandragupta
II, also known as ‘Vikramaditya’ meaning ‘Power of the Sun’ or ‘Valour’, ruled
Ujjain. This Raja Gupta of the Magadha Kingdom was the scion of Samudragupta
and Dattadevi.
Ujjain, in all its glory, stood tall and
proud on the eastern banks of the river Kshipra, in the Malwa region. It flowed
majestically and serenely adding to the city’s splendour and prosperity. Being
the centre of trade and commerce the city became more famous with the Guptas
making it their capital. The merchants especially those coming from Indore made
it their second home. The prolific trade between these two cities brought in
abundant wealth making Ujjain a golden city, thriving and kicking!
Chandragupta I, also called Sri Gupta,
founded the Gupta Dynasty in 320 AD. His grandson, Chandragupta II followed the
policy of world conquest like his father, Samudragupta. His empire extended
from the Bay of Bengal to the Arabian Sea.
He married the beautiful Kuberanaga, a
princess of the Naga Dynasty and secured the friendship of the Vakatakas of
Berar through this matrimonial alliance. What astuteness! He also gave his
daughter Parvati in marriage to the Vakataka king, Rudrasana II, whose death
made her the Regent. She helped her father, Chandragupta, in his campaigns who
comprehensively defeated the Saka Satrapas and annexed Malwa, Kathiawar
(Saurashtra) region and Gujarat. The seaports, now in his possession, opened
new avenues for commercial contacts and contracts with the Western World for
carrying a flourishing trade – another marvellous feather in his cap!
Cultural progress was the hallmark of
Chandragupta II. Literature, art, etc. flourished under his patronage. His
royal court adorned by Navratnas like Kalidas, added to his eminence.
As Visnu’s devotee, Garuda became the
emblem of the Gupta flag. His Brahmanic Hinduism led to sculptured images of
Hindu Gods dotting Ujjain. Surely, his reign epitomized the spirit of
magnanimity and liberalism.
‘Ambavati’, as Ujjain was originally
known, gave rise to the wise and courageous King Vikramaditya. He stands out as an icon winning a permanent
place in the hearts of his people. The golden age of the Gupta’s saw its
highest water-mark, its zenith, during the benign rule of Chandragupta. In
fact, understanding Chandragupta II is understanding Ujjain!
Caesar Augustus said, “I found Rome a city
of clay and left it a city of marble”. Likewise, Chandragupta II could say, “I
found Ujjain a city in chaos but left it a city of gold”.
And what did the Gupta kings, after him,
do? Kumara Gupta and Skanda Gupta kept the Empire running. However, Puru Gupta
(467-69) being old, decandence started setting in as was the case with the
unconquerable Romans. The Hunas from the North and the Vakatakas from the
South, began making in-roads into Gupta territory. Besides, there arose unattended
family feuds proving the saying, ‘a house divided within itself falls,’ right.
Furthermore, the Governors in charge of their provinces took full advantage of
the emaciated ruler and became their own bosses.
Supratik, a loyal, conscientious and
hardworking Chief of Police and Internal Security at Ujjain, could be described
as a person ‘having his wits about him’. Observant, diligent, ingenious,
cunning (in the ways of the Ujjain world) and having a nose for trouble he was
prepared for anything. With his keen perception and the ability to think on his
feet he could size up the gravity of a situation quickly. Being a six-footer,
fair, handsome and athletic too, he moved lithely and sprightly. With
regular exercise he kept himself as fit as a fiddle. His knowledge of the use
of the ‘khanda’, was second to none and his prowess with the bow and arrow –
could hit the bull’s eye without batting his eyelid – was excellent indeed.
Wasn’t he versatile? He certainly was – a man for all seasons! No wonder, His
Majesty, Skanda Gupta had accepted his offer of tying the knot with his
daughter, albeit with the connivance of his sole, lovely offspring Princess
Urvashi who adored him, having fallen head over heels in love and married they
were – royally!
As was his routine now, rising at the
break of dawn, Supratik finishing his ablutions and exercise, had a hearty
breakfast. Readying to go to the headquarters, a messenger arrived with the
news that he was wanted at the riverside.
Supratik
the Chief of Police and Internal Security at Ujjain, walked rapidly up to the
riverside, just as the body was being fished out. The Officer supervising the
operation, turned around and saluted his commander immediately.
“A body was discovered at 7.00 am by some
boys swimming, as was their practice, in the river. They reported the incident
to me at the police station and I left in a hurry with three men carrying the necessary poles and hooks. We
asked Raju, the fisherman, to come with his boat and he willingly obliged. As
you can plainly see, sir, the body is being fished out of the Kshipra river,”
said Officer Puri.
Silent but reflective, the Chief of Police
absorbed what the Officer reported and saw an arrow sticking from the dead
body. He looked at the sand, found some footprints but no boot-marks around. He
searched around and some thirty yards away he discovered the boot-marks leading
to the road. He realized that someone who was a good marksman and a trained
archer had used a bow and arrow to commit this crime. He returned to the banks
of the river and saw the pale body with the blood covered singlet and shorts.
The arrow, 1½ ft long, made of oak had pierced his heart from the back. The
impact of the sturdy arrow had propelled the swimmer head long into the river
killing him before hitting the water.
Investigations revealed that the hapless
victim was a rich jeweller from Ujjain survived by a young wife and a minor
daughter. The police kept the body at the headquarters for further queries from
friends, relatives and informants.
Hardly half an hour later, a rustic came
panting to the station and blurted: Police, police, a man is lying dead in a
pool of blood. He reported that some women had gone to the forest, as was their
habit, to answer nature’s call and were thunderstruck to see the body with eyes
protruding, the mouth wide open and bloody. I went and hastened back to report
to you after seeing the corpse: Supratik, Puri and a police team followed the
villager and horror of horrors, the dead body spoke of an excruciating death at
the hands of a cold-blooded murderer. The Chief sized up the situation: An
expert warrior had struck the unfortunate youth with his ‘khanda’ a double
edged sword. The blade had ripped his chest horizontally and there was no
pointed poke-mark as would have been the case had he used a ‘Firangi’ or a
‘Talwar’ which would finish a person with a poke to the heart.
The area where the body lay was cordoned
off and the corpse removed to the headquarters for further leads. Meanwhile, the
inconsolable parents were taken home by the kind neighbours as their sole wage-earner
was carried gloomily away. The tall frame of the Chief sagged a bit as he
realized that a couple of trained goons had spoilt his day. Two dead persons
murdered for no rhyme or reason or was it? His thoughts were interrupted by
Puri again approaching him with hurried steps.
“Sir,” “Yes?” said the top cop, “Sir,
there’s been another killing – could you kindly come with us?” asked the
officer. Wiping the cold sweat from his face with a kerchief, Supratik donned
his cap and accompanied the policemen to the scene of the crime. A teenage boy,
carrying a sack of oranges to the market
place was whacked with a heavy stick on the side of his temple. The teenager
fell writhing and screaming in pain. The ‘Choradharmika’ – a special officer
trained to catch thieves - witnessed the scene, sprang to his feet and rushed
to help the lad but after a few spasms the body lay still, felled in one blow
by the work of a master killer. In the meantime, the villain had disappeared.
The Dandapastika - the head of this
special police force was informed immediately and he with the duty cop sped all
the way to meet Puri and the three proceeded to inform the Top Cop about the
killing of the teenager and the thug’s escape. Puri thanked the two informants
who accompanied the police team to the site.
‘What’s happening to our peaceful Ujjain?’
muttered Supratik under his breath. “Hello, what’s this, another murder to
report?” asked he of Puri who was striding towards him. “Yes sir and this at
the local school.” Looking washed-out, the same police team arrived at the
institution of learning. Mohan, the school Principal lay on the mud floor with
his tongue lolling out, and hands clutching his throat. Apparently, he had
unlocked the gate and was walking towards his office when the hoodlum struck. ‘Death
by strangulation, compression of the neck, surely’, he surmised. ‘Garroting’ it
is! Bending down he examined the throat and saw the rope- marks on the neck.
The mark being lower on the neck of Mohan, the scholar, was sufficient proof
that he was not hanged but strangulated.
Satisfied with his investigation, the
Chief reached the Headquarters with the choked body of the eminent educationist
following behind. He dispatched two policemen to his house and asked them to
accompany his wife, the Princess, to the Headquarters. He also sent Puri along
with two more cops to five top officials – advisors and police consultants. He
asked two more men to collect more cops from the Station and ordered them to
close the city gates, the port and banned the assembly of more than two people
for the next couple of days. He also sent an emissary to the Commander in Chief
of the Royal Army requesting his presence at the meeting of his Advisors at
11.00 am of the same fateful day.
The eminent seven were informed about the
four murders by officer Puri. Supratik spoke about how the crimes were
committed and what his deduction was. “It is a conspiracy to bring chaos upon
our cherished city Ujjain. With the death of our dearly beloved ruler, His
Majesty, Emperor Skanda – may his soul rest in peace – the enemy thinks we are
weak but we shall prove them wrong”. He also narrated to them the measures he
had already taken and asked them for their wise suggestions and advice. In the
meantime, he requested them to see the four bodies laid out in the special room
before coming to any conclusion.
When they were seated, refreshments were
served and the first person to raise her voice was his wife, Urvashi. “You have
to inform His Majesty, King Puru of what has transpired” – all agreed. She was
requested to do so along with the Commander of the Army, on their behalf and
also report the action being taken. The next speaker said, “How do we know
whether these crimes were committed by four different persons or by a single
goon?” Another added, “Can you elucidate upon the conspiracy theory of the enemy
infiltrating the police?” That made another ask, “How about Ujjain itself falling
into enemy hands and the king’s safety?” The fifth asked him to post more guards
all around the treasury. The sixth added, “No money, no honey for them.”
The
Chief iterated that he would act immediately on their wise suggestions.
Thanking them profusely, he pleaded for their continual support. Before they
broke up, he remarked, “Please do me a favour: Send word to each of the
provinces under your jurisdiction to dispatch four of the best men in each of
these categories today itself, before nightfall: Archer; Khanda swordsman; Danda
warrior; Garroting expert. He saluted everyone and then they dispersed.
Lost in thought, he realized the gravity
of the situation. If Ujjain fell, the kingdom would fall into the hands of the
enemy. The prolific trade between Ujjain and Indore brought about a cut-throat
competition between these two important cities. Flesh trade, kidnappings, and
gambling were the ‘in’ things. Thieves, knifers, money lenders etc. were the
evil accompaniments to the deadly music of crime. But to have four murders,
skillfully executed in about an hour near the Police Headquarters was the
limit. Everything, the more he thought about it, pointed to a plot to capture
the Capital and bring about the downfall of the Gupta Kingdom.
Stirring from his melancholic reverie, he
sent an emissary to the Army Commander, with this message: Night patrol to be
undertaken by the Army. Since police force is compromised, I suggest you send
spies in plain clothes at your earliest, to pubs, brothels, market places,
gambling joints and wherever necessary. He also asked Puri to go home
accompanied by a couple of cops and also post more guards at his own house and
get more reinforcements at the Headquarters along with a reliable officer to
take over from him, for the day. “Thanks,” he said meaningfully. As an after-thought
he added, “Just inform the officer on duty to accommodate the four experts from
each of the provinces who will be arriving in an hour or two. I’ll be back
within a couple of hours.” Puri saluted his boss and they parted.
A sleuth once wise cracked, “Detective
work is 95% sweat and 5% chance.” ‘Well,’ thought Supratik, ‘Where is this lady
luck hiding? When will he chance to meet her?’ When he entered Headquarters after
two hours, he saw cops standing in groups of four.
Supratik stood tall in his Chief of Police
uniform and addressed the summoned specialists from each province, “Gentlemen,
I have the honour to stand before the best of Ujjain’s soldiers consisting of
Archers, Khandwa swordsmen, Danda warriors and Garroting masters. Permit me to
congratulate you and also thank you for the yeoman service done for the Gupta
Emperors and our Kingdom. However, there’s a downside to our good name and
proud history. Four cold-blooded murders were committed this morning and the
criminals are at large. There’s a big reward if any of you help in nabbing the
criminals by revealing any information or evidence. Nevertheless, no mercy will
be shown to the dastardly plotters. If you confess to your crime, mercy will be
yours”. Shocked, nobody moved. Silence reigned supreme!
The Chief then met the four experienced investigators
who would interrogate them for as long as it took to flush out the culprits.
The first Investigator nicknamed ‘Chatter Box’ would talk and make them talk
(friendly). The second was ‘Bone Crusher’: “I’m making no bones of it but I’m
ready to break bones, if needed” (cruel). Third: ‘Bluff master’ would convince
them there was hard evidence against them (serious). Fourth: ‘Sharp eyes’ would
watch for body language and eye-contact (stern).
Intensive interrogation began in earnest but
there was no break-through even till the next morning. These cops were themselves
all well-versed and trained in this art of investigation and couldn’t be fooled
easily which Supratik had anticipated.
Unknown to many, Supratik, had a trump
card up his sleeve which he decided to play. It was his personal bloodhound,
‘Suryakant’. Daily, the hound and the top cop went for their afternoon run
before lunch. Yesterday, they had run to the river bank and the hound was made
to smell the boot-prints - Mind you, bloodhounds have a phenomenal sense of
smell. Besides, they stir up odours from the ground - these fantastic traits
were going to be tested today. The dog sniffed around the shrubs about 30 yards
from the bank and started barking. His master saw what he had expected - a bow
about 5ft long with its string broken. Using his kerchief, he carried it home.
Next, the dog and his master went speedily to the second scene of crime which
had been cordoned off. The bloodhound smelt the dried blood and nosing around
discovered a handkerchief full of blood marks which the assailant had used to
wipe his Khanda. Unwittingly, he had flung the handkerchief away which Supratik picked
up. Again, this duo sped to the market place and by the side of the mud-road
the four-legged sniffer halted for his two-legged investigator to catch up and carry
home the third evidence, namely, the thick stick. Ultimately, they stood in the
school compound and, not surprisingly, they found the rope thrown behind a
tree! Suryakant smelt it while his master bagged the last evidence. “Well done,
boy. You’re promoted to Deputy Head of Police!” The mutt wagged his short tail
and dogbraced him affectionately as he received pats of appreciation.
The four pieces of evidence, brought from
home, were now placed on a large table and one by one the suspects came to see
them. Suryakant who was chained securely about 15 feet away instinctively spotted
the four murderers and tried to pounce on them as they came towards the table
but the chain thwarted his attempt. They were taken away for further questioning
and undoubtedly, the Chief was proved correct. There was a conspiracy by the
Indore business community and the powers that be, to overthrow King Puru and
take over the reigns of power. Princess Urvashi summed it up well: My beloved
husband Supratik has saved Ujjain again. Long live the King, long live Super-cop
Supratik!
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Length of blog: 3000 words (exact).
Genre: Guest Writer